Sunday, 17 November 2013

TARGET AUDIENCE & TEACHER FEEDBACK FOR ARTICLE DRAFT

Below in the green writing is the feed back I have received from my teacher, explaining what I need to do to improve my pop music magazine.








The next three feed back forms are from the target audience of my magazine, explaining what they think I need to improve, to make my magazine more professional and pop like.

















I will be taking on-board all of this feedback from my teacher and my target audience I will then make changes to my article accordingly.

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